Clarifying Silhouettes

 


I have asked two of my online friends to give me feedback on my early thumbnails for the "Wacky Racer".

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LoVER BoY || @shn33p  said that
It could be good to have more decorative elements like ribbons or the like to lean more into the fairy aspect of it. Though I did like the wing motif that the character seems to stick to. Its quite hard to read them as a "racer" because of how busy the outfit looks.


chai || @chaiera said that
Its hard to get a grasp on how the vehicle would look due to the head on angle that majority of those thumbnails have. I like the ideas for the forms but you could go a little harder on the shapes, its a little too cluttered so maybe simplify them.

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The most important thing I need to do is to fix up my silhouettes. I need to make the shape language stronger to sell that racer kind of silhouette. I also need to find a way to give it some detail without overcluttering (maybe a secondary color?). 

My vehicles are mostly fine, they just need to an alternate kind of angle to better communicate the form of the vehicle better. Most likely a side view like some of the ones I have done in my originals.




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